What do you think are the advantages and disadvantages of tourism in a developing country?
The most conspicuous trends of today's world is increasing tourism in a developing country. As such, there are both merits and demerits, although I am of opinion that the former outdo the latter.
There are wide range of arguments in favour of my stance. The most preponderant one is that tourism creates a great income for the economy, for examples developing country like Sri Lanka earn the highest income from visitors. Not only can a country earn money from tourism, but it contributes to the development of the country. Needless to say, all these merits stand human in good stead, as far as developing is concerned.
On the other hand, there are some drawbacks that can easily affect the development, environment, and other important factors of the country. Furthermore, without a good waste management system, people can throw garbage into the water, and land. However, these things can be avoided by organizing effective awareness programs and introducing rules. Then, a country can get the most advantages from tourism and hence, it is apparent why many are favour of the benefits of tourism.
In view of the argument outlined above, one can conclude that despite some drawbacks, the benefits of the tourism in developing country are too great to ignore.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, hence, however, so, then, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 20.9802955665 48% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 31.9359605911 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1064.0 1207.87684729 88% => OK
No of words: 209.0 242.827586207 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09090909091 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71525936338 2.71678728327 100% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 139.433497537 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.588516746411 0.580463131201 101% => OK
syllable_count: 333.9 379.143842365 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.0347712219 50.4703680194 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.7272727273 104.977214359 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.9669160288 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.72727272727 7.25397266985 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199147074703 0.242375264174 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0744743181569 0.0925447433944 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0770184954643 0.071462118173 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121142578483 0.151781067708 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0350936371506 0.0609392437508 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 12.6369458128 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.1260098522 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 11.5310837438 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.32886699507 107% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 55.0591133005 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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