• What roles should governments, companies & individuals play to combat climate change?
Climate change is a worrying concern for the mankind as if left unattended, it could bring dire consequences. Therefore, everyone starting from the government, corporate and individuals should adopt the energy efficient solutions to tackle this potentially detrimental problem. In the following paragraphs, I would suggest some of the possible ways to control the climate change.
As we know, greenhouse gas emission is the major source of climatic change as its warming the earth with each day passing by, hence, eminent scientists have suggested to limit the carbon footprint by adapting to renewable energy such as solar energy and plant more trees each year. According to a quantitative analysis, developed nations such as the United States, Australia are the top energy consumers, so their carbon footprint is worrying. Government could implement energy friendly technologies such as wind power, solar power to generate electricity.
Corporate, which use a huge amount of electricity could use natural light in day time and thus avoid huge electricity consumption. Moreover, big companies should work in new technologies to minimize the carbon footprint. On a personal level, individuals could switch off electricity and other gadget when unnecessary and pledge to plant new trees every month.
To recapitulate, curbing climate change is a responsibility of everyone including government, companies and public. By adopting to measures such as low energy consumption and growing plants we could certainly delay the climate change and thus make the world a safe place to live in.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
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Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'suggested limiting'.
Suggestion: suggested limiting
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Line 3, column 376, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (Australia) must be used with a third-person verb: 'is'.
Suggestion: is
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 10.5418719212 47% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 20.9802955665 33% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 31.9359605911 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1350.0 1207.87684729 112% => OK
No of words: 244.0 242.827586207 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.53278688525 5.00649968141 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00467699569 2.71678728327 111% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 139.433497537 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.635245901639 0.580463131201 109% => OK
syllable_count: 425.7 379.143842365 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.6741331312 50.4703680194 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.727272727 104.977214359 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1818181818 20.9669160288 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.45454545455 7.25397266985 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14817994455 0.242375264174 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0603165036326 0.0925447433944 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0497834426453 0.071462118173 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0961466263683 0.151781067708 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0483453927028 0.0609392437508 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 12.6369458128 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 53.1260098522 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.9458128079 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.79 11.5310837438 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 8.32886699507 113% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 55.0591133005 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.94827586207 141% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 80.0 Out of 90
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