Whether design of building will have a positive or negative impact on people's life and work?
These days architects are working on myriad of design across the world to influence people. In this essay, I shall be elaborating my viewpoint by discussing the notation on both side of the argument.
At the outset, there is a trend of making building with unique or different design that could attract people. In addition to this, the designers of the building keep on analyzing the ways to make building more attractive. I personally believe that design of the building should have access to natural resources should as sunlight and air ventilation. This could be beneficial for people to keep them healthy. For instance, these days people are deficient with Vitamin D which can be obtained from Sun, so it is very important that build should be built with sunlight exposure.
Another aspect is that people use to design their buildings to keep positive energy inside by performing many holy rituals. Moreover, safety is also one the major reason that results in building design. For instance, people use to design the building to handle disaster or illegal activity, so that building can be easily evacuated.
In conclusion, I personally believe that design of the building is an important factor that results into positive or negative impact on people. So architects should evaluate all the aspects before sharing the design.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, so, for instance, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1120.0 1207.87684729 93% => OK
No of words: 219.0 242.827586207 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11415525114 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63817107544 2.71678728327 97% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 139.433497537 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566210045662 0.580463131201 98% => OK
syllable_count: 350.1 379.143842365 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.0540023217 50.4703680194 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 93.3333333333 104.977214359 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.25 20.9669160288 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 7.25397266985 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287122068619 0.242375264174 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109204402928 0.0925447433944 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0630525310556 0.071462118173 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170800055402 0.151781067708 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0644428577841 0.0609392437508 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 12.6369458128 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 53.1260098522 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 11.5310837438 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.32886699507 100% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 55.0591133005 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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