While technology can provide benefits, it can also cause problems and challenges.
Describe how technology affects you or someone you know. Include positive as well as negative effects.
In the tech-savvy era, it is unrefuttable fact that the world of computers and machines are continuously an indispensable tool for mankind. It helps people accomplish their work easily. Nonetheless, it has also some drawbacks such as making them lazy.
To begin with, computers nowadays are becoming the main platform to perform task. This is especially true for corporations and industries who uses equipment and advanced software to accomplish the work supposedly intended for men. The convenience these machines provide make life easier and faster even without human intervention. In terms of output, with the aid of technology, there is a 40% increase compared to man-hours work according to the latest data presented in IBM company in 2013.
On the other note, the advent of automation has also changed the attitude of humans. Younger generations in the present time do have the latest gadgets which in turn make them become lazy. They usually rely on these instruments and not even spare an effort to recheck the output of these most trusted technology. To illustrate, children starting at age of 3 already learned how to use iPad and when they grew up, does not even know any single household chores.
To recapitulate, technological proliferation is an asset to human race due to simplifying the difficult task, yet it has also a downside if used by people who are letting it control their lives and changing their habits. Indeed, it is a win-win situation for all, it is only a matter of tolerance as well as maximizing its potential use.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, nonetheless, so, well, such as, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 6.10837438424 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1300.0 1207.87684729 108% => OK
No of words: 258.0 242.827586207 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03875968992 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89609332188 2.71678728327 107% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 139.433497537 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.65503875969 0.580463131201 113% => OK
syllable_count: 414.0 379.143842365 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.4732483914 50.4703680194 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.0 104.977214359 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8461538462 20.9669160288 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.15384615385 7.25397266985 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.055435308404 0.242375264174 23% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0171512212355 0.0925447433944 19% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0200707176355 0.071462118173 28% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0319110289254 0.151781067708 21% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.019002326699 0.0609392437508 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 12.6369458128 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.1260098522 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 11.5310837438 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.32886699507 111% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 55.0591133005 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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