Who is responsible for climate change, wheather Government or industries? (if choose Government)
The imprtance of climate change and its responsible bodies to control and mange either government or industries, which is always debatable, has now become more controversial. The substantial influence of climate change has sparked the controversy over the potential impacts of this trend on climate and society in recent year. It can be said that the goverment is responsible for the climate change and should manage it properly.
At the outset, there are numerious reasons why government is responsible for the climate change, but the most conspicios one steam from the fact that government is law making and implementing bodies, so it should make effective law. for example, a reseach conducted on Central University had revealed that the government is becoming leveral with industrial bodies, so there is no strong rules to reduce the emmission of carbondioxide. Moreover, Government has all the rights to impliment any kind of right to protect climate chnage. Therefore, government is responsible for climate change.
Nevertheless there remains same drawbacks, which can certainly overwhalm the potential influence of change and its responsible bodies to control and mange either government or industries, but the most alarming one is rooted from the fact that indrstries it self is responsible for society and future generation because they live in the same community asuall. For example, Industrial people live and work in the same environment where it is resonsible for climate change, thus they should try to develop environmentle friendly production process.
From above discussion it can be concluded that the govenment is responsible for climate changes is prominent, but the responsibility od industry it self should not be ignored.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, moreover, nevertheless, so, therefore, thus, for example, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.5418719212 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 8.36945812808 167% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 31.9359605911 75% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 5.75862068966 278% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1483.0 1207.87684729 123% => OK
No of words: 271.0 242.827586207 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.47232472325 5.00649968141 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03992308086 2.71678728327 112% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 139.433497537 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.520295202952 0.580463131201 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 460.8 379.143842365 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.5024630542 132% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 80.0164982988 50.4703680194 159% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.3 104.977214359 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.1 20.9669160288 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.25397266985 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.419262580053 0.242375264174 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.20201185993 0.0925447433944 218% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.130734763194 0.071462118173 183% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.25914395847 0.151781067708 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0947495734794 0.0609392437508 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.9 12.6369458128 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 53.1260098522 67% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.9458128079 137% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 11.5310837438 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.32886699507 107% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 55.0591133005 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.94827586207 146% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.3980295567 123% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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