The World is becoming a forest of the building. It is becoming difficult to find trees everywhere. What is the main reason for the global warming? Can you suggest ways, to eradicate global warming?
In this industrial era, the trees are replacing with large skyscrapers. Due to the deforestation the atmospheric temperatures goes up and which leads to climate change. The main reason for climate change is Global warming. This essay will discuss the main reasons for the global warming and what we can do to eradicate global warming.
Deforestation is the primary cause of global warming. By wiping out of the trees from the nature can leads to increase in temperatures and increase atmospheric pollution. In addition, industrialisation takes a pivotal role in global warming by the emission of poisonous gases to the atmosphere resulting in the ozone depletion. For instance, the atmosphere is being contaminated by the myriad of activities by the human beings. In facts, the trees can help to save the atmosphere and prevent the pollution.
In this modern era, the urban areas are increasing as population growth goes higher. Due to the increasing rate of crowding the trees are replacing with large buildings for accommodation and businesses. These trend is increasing and can not controlled as long as the humans live in the world. On the other hand, people should work by hand to hand to save our atmosphere from large explosion. Encourage to plant trees and try to avoid atmospheric pollutions. Governments should take necessary actions to control industrial waste products and gases to avoid global warming.
Global warming is the major cause which increases atmospheric temperature and ozone depletion. Instead of demolishing trees all around the world , have to plant trees and keep our future safe.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'lead'
Suggestion: lead
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Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'control'
Suggestion: control
.... These trend is increasing and can not controlled as long as the humans live in the world...
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Line 5, column 335, Rule ID: PHRASE_REPETITION[1]
Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'hand to'.
Suggestion: hand to
...n the other hand, people should work by hand to hand to save our atmosphere from large explosio...
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Line 5, column 403, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'planting'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'encourage' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: planting
...osphere from large explosion. Encourage to plant trees and try to avoid atmospheric poll...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...f demolishing trees all around the world , have to plant trees and keep our future...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, for instance, in addition, in fact, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 20.9802955665 33% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 31.9359605911 125% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.75862068966 191% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1359.0 1207.87684729 113% => OK
No of words: 259.0 242.827586207 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2471042471 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97457420751 2.71678728327 109% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 139.433497537 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.498069498069 0.580463131201 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 418.5 379.143842365 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 5.0 1.56157635468 320% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6551724138 134% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.5024630542 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.0952510706 50.4703680194 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 79.9411764706 104.977214359 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2352941176 20.9669160288 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.35294117647 7.25397266985 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245722913533 0.242375264174 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0850891543805 0.0925447433944 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0904610096013 0.071462118173 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170231004627 0.151781067708 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0785795892941 0.0609392437508 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 12.6369458128 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 53.1260098522 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.9458128079 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.58 11.5310837438 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.32886699507 101% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 55.0591133005 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.3980295567 77% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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