shiva.m91167

About me

Hi dear, I have GRE exam in 30 November. I want to improve the writing skill.

I am from

Iran

Goal

I am looking for peers for the peer assessment of essays

Gender

Female

Level

Intermediate

Member for

7 years

My essays:

• The first step to self-knowledge is rejection of the familiar. 50
• A person who knowing commits a crime has broken the social contract and should not retain and civil rights or the to benefit from his or her own labor. 66
• Two years ago, consultants predicted that West Egg's landfill, which is used for garbage disposal, would be completely filled within five years. During the past two years, however, the town's residents have been recycling twice as much material as they di 68
• Teachers' salaries should be based on their students' academic performance. 54
• The best way to teach is to praise positive actions and ignore negative ones. 66
• Formal education tends to restrain our minds and spirits rather than set them free. 66
• Claim: In any field—business, politics, education, government—those in power should step down after five years.Reason: The surest path to success for any enterprise is revitalization through new leadership. 66
• "One month ago, all the showerheads in the first three buildings of the Sunnyside Towers complex were modified to restrict maximum water flow to one-third of what it used to be. Although actual readings of water usage before and after the adjustment are n 58