The idea of marrying before academic completion has recently been the subject of much controversy. While many people believe that it is acceptable to do so, others argued that it is an irrational thought.
This essay will discuss the reason why getting married before finishing study is indeed a foolish decision.
A reliable financial resource is the most paramount prerequisite of marriage and by completing a formal study, one could have a higher chance to acquire a proper profession to financially support the family. Getting married require abundance of responsibilities including financial independency. For example, it is highly impossible to cover housing expenses without a proper income, or when the study debt are pilling up. In shorts, getting married before settling in a reasonable job is an unwise decision.
On top of that, getting married is highly connected with the burden of raising offsprings. Bringing up decent children requires mature characteristic, well-developed mental and attention, hence it is a tedious process to raise children when trying to completing the education and be presence for the the family. Which is why, being exposed to academic environment helps one to develop maturity and characteristic. In other words, it is better to finish the education before thinking of marrying and start a family.
This essay has discussed the reason why marrying before completing the education or getting a proper job will affect the new family both financially and mentally. Therefore I am consummately in accord that it is indeed not a good idea, hence it is important to finish study and settle in a proper career before starting a family.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
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Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hinking of marrying and start a family. This essay has discussed the reason why ...
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Suggestion: Therefore,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, so, therefore, well, while, for example, in short, in other words, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.5418719212 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 20.9802955665 67% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1414.0 1207.87684729 117% => OK
No of words: 267.0 242.827586207 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29588014981 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02621259317 2.71678728327 111% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 139.433497537 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565543071161 0.580463131201 97% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 379.143842365 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.4265233428 50.4703680194 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.769230769 104.977214359 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5384615385 20.9669160288 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.76923076923 7.25397266985 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241212142926 0.242375264174 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0953139021325 0.0925447433944 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0757062578417 0.071462118173 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144064849911 0.151781067708 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.038105759326 0.0609392437508 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 12.6369458128 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 53.1260098522 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 11.5310837438 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.32886699507 108% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 55.0591133005 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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