Nowaday, people living in large cities face many problems in their daily lives. What are these problems? Do you think the government should encourage people to move to smaller towns?
As society has become more centered on city life, people acknowledge that time spent in urban area causes several negative consequences to the population who live in a big city. Because of that, I think the authorities should persuade civilization to move to the country side.
Firstly, Experts agree that the best way to rejuvenate body and mind is to spent time in nature, breathing pure air, doing regular physical exercise there. This is crucial because majority of population in many countries now are living in city, and people tent to become sedentary and stay in door. Recent studied have shown that spending long periods time in built-up area result in a emotional exhaustion and poor concentration, while time spent in the country side has an opposite effect. In addition, teenagers are the most negatively affected by city life. Their parents are reluctant to let them play freely in town, be concern about their safety and health, and so these youngsters miss out on being in nature that is responsible for the higher risk of childhood obesity and depression than the country side kids. On top of this, gadering a great number of people in big city increases the needs of private vehicles in town that lead to the rising of greenhouse gases. Those gases are claimed for thousands of deaths per year and as well as rising rate of lung cancer in children
Secondly, Government should take steps to convince civilization to live in smaller town by investing to the transportation system and infrastructure such as: electricity, road, underground rail systems. The truth is that, since cars rolled mass production lines in early 20th century, ancient roads have been replaced by highways that make travelling become more convenient and shorten the distance between city and country side.
In summary, Spending time in city could lead to the untold harm to people and the environment alike. However moving to the suburban area could be the best solution and should be encourage by government
- Some people think it is more beneficial to play sports that are played in teams. However, some people think it is more beneficial to play individual sports. Discuss both views and give your own opinion 73
- Should parks in city be replaced by different purposes. do you agree or disagree 78
- Research shows that business meetings, discussions and training are happening online nowadays. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages? 84
- The tradition that family gets together to eat meals is disappearing. What are the reasons? What are the impacts 84
- Indivudual sports and team sports 89
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 384, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...periods time in built-up area result in a emotional exhaustion and poor concentra...
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Line 4, column 178, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'encouraged'?
Suggestion: encouraged
...ould be the best solution and should be encourage by government
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, well, while, i think, in addition, in summary, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1671.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01801801802 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66778579444 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606606606607 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 528.3 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.7297859996 49.4020404114 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.25 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.75 20.7667163134 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.75 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203877053914 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0704975265805 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0382865851023 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123938881932 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0231688312439 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.