It is foolish to get married before completing your studies and getting established in a good job. Do you agree or disagree?
In recent years, it has become trend to get married before completing studies and without getting established in a good job. Many people argue that it will be tough at later point of time if we marry before settling in career. I strongly agree with the statement that planning for marriage before completion of graduation may lead to several problems. This essay would further explain the reasons why getting married before settlement can affect a person's life and education with justifying examples.
First and foremost, the responsibility of spouse can add extra chores to a greater degree. Say for an instance, a married person has to take some time out of his study plan to spend with his wife, whereas a single person can concentrate on his studies and has the chance of scoring high marks and grades in college and university. This example clearly exemplifies us that marriage is big burden for student. From this it can be concluded that it's better to delay marriage and focus on academics.
Furthermore, initial stages of work life will be very hard and are usually grueling. The new joiners has to spend considerable amount of time to get established and learn new things in office. For example, a employee settling up in new job may have to travel to different locations or branches to meet the demands of workplace. If the spouse is dependent, it can be tough for person to take her to every place he travels. When looking at this example, it is clear that it is foolish to get married before settlement.
According to the arguments aforementioned, one can reach out to conclusion that it is beneficial to complete studies and have a well settled career before adding up a responsibility of spouse
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 449, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
... married before settlement can affect a persons life and education with justifying exam...
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Line 5, column 102, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[2]
Message: You should probably use 'have', 'haven'.
Suggestion: have; haven
...d are usually grueling. The new joiners has to spend considerable amount of time to...
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Line 5, column 207, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...earn new things in office. For example, a employee settling up in new job may hav...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, look, may, so, well, whereas, as to, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 6.10837438424 180% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 20.9802955665 124% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 31.9359605911 157% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1426.0 1207.87684729 118% => OK
No of words: 294.0 242.827586207 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85034013605 5.00649968141 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75814059367 2.71678728327 102% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 139.433497537 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56462585034 0.580463131201 97% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 379.143842365 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.2070730327 50.4703680194 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.857142857 104.977214359 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.9669160288 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.14285714286 7.25397266985 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272774817697 0.242375264174 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0950763350253 0.0925447433944 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.130267271062 0.071462118173 182% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162362997372 0.151781067708 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.12423088516 0.0609392437508 204% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 12.6369458128 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 53.1260098522 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 11.5310837438 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.32886699507 99% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 55.0591133005 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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