school should organize activities after classes. To what extent do you agree?
Childhood is the period of learning and pupil can learn number of thing in school. In competitive era it is very necessary for learner to get a success in different fields. I think that school play important part through organizing various activities. I am going to explain the importance and reason for arranging these activities in upcoming paragraphs.
Highlighting my views, I deem that the main reason for arranging activities is to create interest of student in extra curriculum activities like dance, sports and painting competition through which they can easily choose their field for future. Further, extra activities rather than study also divert mind of students from monotonous routine which ultimately leads to good result in study and competitions
The another conducive point is that extra activities after classes can make students socialize because they meet with different people and students who may be have different interest. This interaction makes their communication skills more affective and good which ultimately improve their personality in society. Above all this, the another relevant idea is that they remain busy in their task and spend less time to use social media and they do not involve in social evils.
Summarizing the whole text, I reiterate my opinion that involvement in different activities improves the overall image and qualities of student so their need to organize this on school level and also motivated for participation by giving positive incentives
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 258, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ticipation by giving positive incentives
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, so, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.5418719212 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 20.9802955665 119% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1267.0 1207.87684729 105% => OK
No of words: 235.0 242.827586207 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3914893617 5.00649968141 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79967662881 2.71678728327 103% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 139.433497537 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.642553191489 0.580463131201 111% => OK
syllable_count: 399.6 379.143842365 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.5024630542 127% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 89.872062702 50.4703680194 178% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.777777778 104.977214359 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1111111111 20.9669160288 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.88888888889 7.25397266985 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.122049528211 0.242375264174 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0506147521997 0.0925447433944 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0359850153275 0.071462118173 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0764719251944 0.151781067708 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0209224521369 0.0609392437508 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 12.6369458128 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 53.1260098522 69% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.9458128079 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.28 11.5310837438 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.32886699507 108% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 55.0591133005 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.3980295567 119% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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