Do you think that formal written examinations are a good way to assess knowledged at school?
Students at school for learning and getting knowledge is main an essential outlook of early adolescent age in individual life in this world. Some people believe that writing exams in school in formal format provide the knowledge and other argue that writing exams in formally words is not alter knowledge. In this essay, I shall discuss that formal way to write exams is not only provide knowledge but it provides etiquette in individual life.
Firstly, schools have itinerary to pursue the study throughout the subjects which demand exam to get into next academic year. Writing any exam in etiquette and moral boundaries develops the attitude and mind set of students. This process is not limited to writing only but accommodates on daily basis in our general life. Acquiring these morals from any medium either writing or speaking or reading comes verbal in our social life. Any exam out of this format leads inadequate knowledge and lack of problem resolving skills.
Secondly, communication between students must be elucidate with unequivocal manners. After completion of school, college, person leads nations and sits in many international debate. The way person communicates to other participants, better is option of deal. To resolve any problems in life, knowledge and courage is primarily mandate to accomplish the aim. Pursuance formal way is best way to get happiness.
In recapitulate, examination in school with formal writing format provides an outlook of growth. People and regime of nation must do scrutiny of study format. There should be no loophole to cultivate the knowledge in students.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, look, second, secondly, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 20.9802955665 57% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 31.9359605911 132% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1354.0 1207.87684729 112% => OK
No of words: 257.0 242.827586207 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26848249027 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72583576605 2.71678728327 100% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 139.433497537 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587548638132 0.580463131201 101% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 379.143842365 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6551724138 126% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5024630542 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.3954051469 50.4703680194 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 84.625 104.977214359 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0625 20.9669160288 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.1875 7.25397266985 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.33497536946 131% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 2.91625615764 240% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197659764855 0.242375264174 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0653043110873 0.0925447433944 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0559012502725 0.071462118173 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129169747673 0.151781067708 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0588551861182 0.0609392437508 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 12.6369458128 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 53.1260098522 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.99 11.5310837438 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.32886699507 111% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 55.0591133005 142% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.3980295567 81% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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