The world’s governments and organizations are facing a lot of issues. Which do you think is the most pressing problem for the inhabitants on our planet and give the solution?
One of the most conspicuous trends of the today's world is a colossal upsurge in people believing that government and organisations are facing lot of issue due to inflation. There are a number of factors accountable for why this is happening. In my opinion, this situation can be remedied provided some effective measures are taken.
There are a number of reasons in favor of my stance. The most preponderant one is the rising population which leads to increase in demand. Not only population rise can lead to rise in price of products, but it can also lead to decrease in value of money. Needless to say, all these demerits have a far-reaching impact on government and other organisations.
Steps to deal with this situation are many; the most effective ones are not complicated or remote but accessible and practicable. The primary one stems from the fact that the government should make some strict laws to control the population so that the demands can be decreased and state of inflation can be controlled. Only when convergent efforts from all the sectors are ensured, can we expect to see a considerable change in curbing the situation.
To conclude, dealing with the rise in population is one of the most prevailing issues from all parts of the world, which is impacting government and organisations. Nevertheless, the above mentioned concrete steps can strengthen the fight against inflation and alleviate this growing concern. Its potential impact is too dire to ignore.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, nevertheless, so, then, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.5418719212 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 20.9802955665 62% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 5.75862068966 243% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1243.0 1207.87684729 103% => OK
No of words: 246.0 242.827586207 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05284552846 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95975439472 2.71678728327 109% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 139.433497537 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556910569106 0.580463131201 96% => OK
syllable_count: 393.3 379.143842365 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.5758197973 50.4703680194 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.6153846154 104.977214359 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9230769231 20.9669160288 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.69230769231 7.25397266985 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.103121945166 0.242375264174 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0382365146641 0.0925447433944 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0501702723823 0.071462118173 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0699387707008 0.151781067708 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0359665037753 0.0609392437508 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 12.6369458128 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 53.1260098522 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 11.5310837438 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.32886699507 104% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 55.0591133005 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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