Some people believe that children should be allowed to stay at home and play until they are six or seven years old. Others believe that it is important for young children to go to school as soon as possible. What do you think are the advantages of attending school from a young age?
Some parents think that children should go to school very early, others consider that their age should be from six to seven years old.
Admittedly, the child's brain is developing very fast at first years of the life. That is why a child can absorb information with a very high speed. Thus, before they are six years old, they may learn different things easily. Moreover, the knowledge they receive during this period of time will influence their future life, as there will be special neural connections in the brain. For instance, if a boy or a girl learns Chinese or French in the early childhood, it will be easier for them to master these languages when they grow up. Another example of this is listening to the classical music in the infancy. According to the last researches, it develops brain and the sense of beauty and, besides, it improves the feeling of rhythm.
As a matter of fact, children may learn reading and counting when they are only two or three. Hence, our abilities are endless. To my opinion, the best way of education in this age is a game. Children understand everything through the game, as it is their leading activity. Thus, they should not seat on the chairs as they do in the ordinary schools; they may play on the floor and learn new things.
Overall, going to school at the early age is a fascinating idea. If a child starts the education at three or four, he or she will be very successful in the future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, hence, if, may, moreover, so, thus, for instance, as a matter of fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1188.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58687258687 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40521017819 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586872586873 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 351.9 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.7268707999 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.2 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2666666667 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241763735179 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.070626930569 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0847984352596 0.0667982634062 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167920429447 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100634740565 0.056905535591 177% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 13.0946893788 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 50.2224549098 142% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 12.4159519038 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.35 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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