These days, more and more people are going to other countries for significant periods of time, either to find a job or to study. There are clearly many benefits to doing this, but people who live abroad can also face some difficulties.Discuss advantages a
People are going abroad increasingly for employment and higher education over last few decades. It has brought a significant change in their life, however moving into an unfamiliar place is always challenging. There are pros and cons of moving to a new place.
Globalization has opened the door for the job seekers. This process is augmented by the availability of internet service which facilitates application submission to interviewing the candidate through video conference. Similarly, each year large number of students are leaving the home country for higher education in western countries. The benefits are not limited to getting a job and completion of a course rather they get the opportunity for cultural exploration, learn the new language, history, geography and social values and norms of the new place.
On the other hand, people face some challenges in new places, for example, the linguistic barrier which create a gap from establishing effective communication with local people. It causes more frustration when anyone finds that surrounding people are speaking in a different language. Stay healthy is another difficult task initially as it takes time to accustom with changing the weather. Finding medical facilities is not a difficult job in a new place, but people feel more helpless when they become sick as there is none to look after them. Cultural difference is preventing assimilation with native culture.
In conclusion, despite the potential benefits of moving into a foreign country for a job or higher education, there are ample of challenges faced by the newcomers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, similarly, so, for example, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1353.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36904761905 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97540465816 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.634920634921 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 431.1 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.9342028955 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.076923077 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3846153846 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.46153846154 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226809320432 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.069609038671 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0531301068258 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12236592565 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0385772104686 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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