Parents should be held legally responsible for their children’s acts
It is argued that parents are responsible for children’s act in the modern world. In this essay I will discuss wheather parents are responsible for children’s act.
On my point of view children spend most of its time with their parents, therefore their behaviour highly effect on their children. Besides that children consider their parents as their role models, therefore it is fair to charge parents legally responsible for their children’s act.
For an example most of the children of prisoners grow up in an unsecured environment, therefore there is a tendency of them commit into crimes in their adult life. On the other hand majority of children of teachers and professionals tends to be good citizens of the society in the future.
This decission is controversial because anyboady can argue that each person is considered as a seperate legal entity. But, children who are under the age of eighteen can be considered as dependents because they are unable to earn for themselves, therefore parents are directly liable for their children’s acts.
In conclusion it is recommended to held parents liable for children’s acts till they reach the age of eighteen. After that each person should be considered as a seperate legal entity. However governments bear the responsibility of providing secured environment for children together with a high quality living standards for all the citizens of the country before imposing laws on them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 190, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
... considered as a seperate legal entity. However governments bear the responsibility of ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, however, if, so, therefore, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 8.36945812808 12% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 20.9802955665 119% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1243.0 1207.87684729 103% => OK
No of words: 233.0 242.827586207 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3347639485 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11479189794 2.71678728327 115% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 139.433497537 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.549356223176 0.580463131201 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 382.5 379.143842365 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.5853200418 50.4703680194 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.0 104.977214359 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1818181818 20.9669160288 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.72727272727 7.25397266985 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.615869271 0.242375264174 254% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.247311650482 0.0925447433944 267% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.15037001539 0.071462118173 210% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.346537358394 0.151781067708 228% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.124770686169 0.0609392437508 205% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 12.6369458128 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 53.1260098522 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 11.5310837438 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.32886699507 103% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 55.0591133005 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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