A country I would like to visit
As I am fond of traveling, I have been to many interesting places in our country. Now I have a chance to learn about ASEAN countries, including my country. A country I would like to visit is Cambodia.
I think that visiting Cambodia is very exciting since it has many sights to keep the tourists occupied. I would very much like to visit the world's largest "Ankow Wut" temple which is situated in northwest of Cambodia. As it was built in 12th century, it is one of the centuries old pagodas which is worth visiting. I would also like to visit Silver Pagoda which is situated in Royal palace compound. Unlike other pagodas, it's floor is made up of five thousand silver tiles. I also want to see the frescos on the wall. These frescos reveal the classical play of Ramayana in Khmer version. If I get there, I will surely visit the National Museum which represents the finest of Phenom Phon architecture. I want to see more than 5000 work of arts ranging from 6th to 13th century. I am sure that National Museum is the treasure house of Asia richest culture. I also want to go to market areas and buy some antiques.
Actually, I would like to see and experience the culture, customs and facinating wonders in Cambodia. That is why, I would like to have a chance to visit Cambodia, a member of ASEAN.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 866, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...treasure house of Asia richest culture. I also want to go to market areas and buy...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, if, may, so, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 1.00243902439 599% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 25.0 5.60731707317 446% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1076.0 965.302439024 111% => OK
No of words: 238.0 196.424390244 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.52100840336 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55318402704 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 106.607317073 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 343.8 283.868780488 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 1.53170731707 979% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 8.94146341463 179% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 21.7998709859 43.030603864 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 67.25 112.824112599 60% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 14.875 22.9334400587 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.25 5.23603664747 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 3.70975609756 404% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.365333352477 0.215688989381 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129185609201 0.103423049105 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.213072152047 0.0843802449381 253% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.274297126353 0.15604864568 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0630330937356 0.0819641961636 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 13.2329268293 55% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 61.2550243902 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.3012195122 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.34 11.4140731707 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 40.7170731707 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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