Some people say that government should break down all the historical buildings and replace them with modern buildings. Do you agree or disagree?
Few perportion of individuals think that administration should destroy all the historical places and convert them into modern buildings. This essay will strongly disaccord with the given statement because in my knowledge, it may people can forget their culture and tradition and there will be a no place for worship.
To begin with, if government take this hard step behind this phenomenon of constructing new buildings which will be detrimental for every religion peopl. For instance, they may forget their culture and tradition and their religion will be on the back seat. So that, it will be biggest menance to crash the dreams of religious person.moreover, there will be a no other source to worship without any historical buildings. For example, religious building act as a stepping stone in every individual life because every person keenly attached with their religious place from the core of their heart and they will be hearted if authority break down the historical places. In result, masses encounter with many problems in their life which create adverse effects in their life. Furthermore, many visitors visit to any country to know the tradition and culture of that country. For instance, they spend hefty some of money to visit one place to another place and boost the economy of that country by visiting and also adopt the culture of that country by which they donot visit to that country where many people give preference to modern buildings instead of historical places.
On the other hand, if government want to build new buildings then they have to purchase empty land to build them which not only provide employment to people but also historical buildings will be preserved. Which will be fruitful for every individual ae well as administration.
To conclude, every thing have his own importance in this world and without historical buildings masses donot imagine their life. While, with historical places every person,s feelings will be attached and no one have right to destroy their dreams.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 172, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , s
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, then, well, while, for example, for instance, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1694.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14893617021 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66055214336 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.495440729483 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 517.5 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.2407047313 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.307692308 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3076923077 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.61538461538 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185366811471 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0729383563141 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0657635411758 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130352767146 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0337028693778 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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