Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In the past, young people depended too much on their parents to make decisions for them; today young people are better able to make decisions about their own lives. Use specific reasons and examples t

Grammar and spelling errors:
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...nd this role never conceald. Meanwhile, this days, a plethora of peoples are of the ...
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Suggestion: a decision; decisions
...hese days have a better ability to make a decisions that their previous counterparts.In the...
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Suggestion: In
...isions that their previous counterparts.In the following paragraph, I will elabora...
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...pport my standpoint is that youngesters this days are more knowledgable and have a b...
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...ally, this day there are manifold place fro people to learn and increased their kno...
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Suggestion: addition,
...in which ther learn different think. In addition the society, these days there are many ...
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...ition the society, these days there are many movie that narrate the peoples live, and mimi...
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... the society, these days there are many movie that narrate the peoples live, and mimi...
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Suggestion: this movie; these movies
...s live, and mimic the real life; during these movie several point demonstrated deliberatel...
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...mimic the real life; during these movie several point demonstrated deliberately that broden ...
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...g these movie several point demonstrated deliberately that broden peoples horizon...
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Suggestion: Take
...ll try to escape from them in real life.Take my own experience into condideration, l...
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Suggestion: Consequently,
... other source for acuiring information. Consequently they had tried to learn from their pare...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, consequently, if, regarding, so, while, for example, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 43.0788530466 123% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1972.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 391.0 407.700716846 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04347826087 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44676510885 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69729927307 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53452685422 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 616.5 618.680645161 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.1344086022 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 105.522316046 48.9658058833 216% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 140.857142857 100.406767564 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.9285714286 20.6045352989 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.07142857143 5.45110844103 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.5376344086 235% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221635621435 0.236089414692 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0773475032683 0.076458572812 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0498889011754 0.0737576698707 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14097752694 0.150856017488 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0408621122594 0.0645574589148 63% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 11.7677419355 139% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 58.1214874552 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.1575268817 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 10.9000537634 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 86.8835125448 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.0537634409 127% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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