Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In the past, young people depended too much on their parents to make decisions for them; today young people are better able to make decisions about their own lives. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
From the down of the word, parents have and indispansible role for conducting their child toward a successful life and this role never conceald. Meanwhile, this days, a plethora of peoples are of the opinion that the youngsters who live in these they are more independant than those who live in the past. After regarding different factor into consideration, I, totally support this idea that the young peoples in these days have a better ability to make a decisions that their previous counterparts.In the following paragraph, I will elaborate more details to explain my point of vies.
The firs and most exquisit reasons which com to mint to support my standpoint is that youngesters this days are more knowledgable and have a broder horizon. Actually, this day there are manifold place fro people to learn and increased their knowledge about the life. Fore exmaple, at the begining of school childeren attend in the different class in which ther learn different think. In addition the society, these days there are many movie that narrate the peoples live, and mimic the real life; during these movie several point demonstrated deliberately that broden peoples horizon. For example, by seen a movie that in it the young peoples' fault arised a tremendous result for whome or his familiy, youngsters learn the couse of this reasult and will try to escape from them in real life.Take my own experience into condideration, last year for selecting my university field I asked some question from my parent about, medicin, my fariout field of study, But, beacause they do not have sutiable experience in this field, couldnot help me. So, I decided to serach more and more to elevate my knowledge for chosing a good decision.
Another important reasone that deservers some word heer is that the parent in the past was the only source witch were accessable to the young people. They also were their childs' role model. So, childs do not had other source for acuiring information. Consequently they had tried to learn from their parent and this increased their dependence to parents.
Make a long story short, by considering all the aforementioned reasond into concideration, I, totally support this idea that these daye the youngusters more autonomus because of their broaden horizon, more knoledge of real life and the experinece that they aquire from their parents.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, consequently, if, regarding, so, while, for example, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 43.0788530466 123% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1972.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 391.0 407.700716846 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04347826087 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44676510885 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69729927307 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53452685422 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 616.5 618.680645161 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.1344086022 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 105.522316046 48.9658058833 216% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 140.857142857 100.406767564 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.9285714286 20.6045352989 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.07142857143 5.45110844103 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.5376344086 235% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221635621435 0.236089414692 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0773475032683 0.076458572812 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0498889011754 0.0737576698707 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14097752694 0.150856017488 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0408621122594 0.0645574589148 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 11.7677419355 139% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 58.1214874552 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.1575268817 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 10.9000537634 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 86.8835125448 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.0537634409 127% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.