You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The table below shows the sales at a small restaurant in a downtown business district.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
You should write at least 150 words.
Sales: week of October 7-13
Mon.
Tues.
Wed.
Thus.
Fri.
Sat.
Sun.
Lunch
$2,400
$2,450
$2,595
$2,375
$2,500
$1,950
$1,550
Dinner
$3,623
$3,850
$3,445
$3,800
$4,350
$2,900
$2,450
The given table provides the figures for sales during lunch and dinner timings in one week of October 13' at a small restaurant in a downtown business district.
Overall, it is found that maximum sale was seen on Friday at dinner timings whereas little sale on Sunday lunch.
Most people go shopping in the evening that is at dinner time and also people choose particular days as well for shopping. As per given information, we can see that least sale is on Saturday and Sunday lunchtime, worth $1,950 and $1,550, respectively while other days have a comparatively higher sale, about $2,400 to $2,500. In contrast to the whole week sale, Friday evening showed maximum sale worth $4,350. During the weekend at dinner time, people buy fewer items about $2,500. Likewise lunchtime, in other days sale at dinner time fluctuates between 3,500 to 3,800 dollars.
In conclusion, people prefer evening time for shopping and mostly Friday after hack tick weekdays and minimum sale during weekends at lunchtime.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 218, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...day and Sunday lunchtime, worth ,950 and ,550, respectively while other days have ...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... have a comparatively higher sale, about ,400 to ,500. In contrast to the whole we...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...Friday evening showed maximum sale worth ,350. During the weekend at dinner time, ...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...inner time, people buy fewer items about ,500. Likewise lunchtime, in other days s...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Likewise,
...ime, people buy fewer items about ,500. Likewise lunchtime, in other days sale at dinner...
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Line 3, column 500, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'days'' or 'day's'?
Suggestion: days'; day's
...bout ,500. Likewise lunchtime, in other days sale at dinner time fluctuates between ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, likewise, so, well, whereas, while, at least, in conclusion, in contrast, in contrast to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 828.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 166.0 196.424390244 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98795180723 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.416556335 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.602409638554 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 248.4 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.0856431443 43.030603864 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.5 112.824112599 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.75 22.9334400587 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.75 5.23603664747 224% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 1.69756097561 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133581163349 0.215688989381 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0708070537624 0.103423049105 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0473010885627 0.0843802449381 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0975949218446 0.15604864568 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0546788179079 0.0819641961636 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 61.2550243902 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.