In many countries, women no longer feel need to get married. Some people believe that some women are able to earn their own income and do not require security a man can bring. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
' Marriage is bond of love and trust between two souls' . Marriage is considered as one of the most spirtual event therefore decision of marrying someone should not be taken in hurry as our whole upcoming life depends on this decision. Nowadays in this modern era of advancement most women are no more interested in getting married. But, is it true that nowadays women are able to earn their own income and do not need a man for financial help and protection? I will give my opinion with suitable examples in upcoming paragraphs of this essay.
I completely agree with the above statement. Domestic violence is one of the biggest social stigma that most females have to face after getting married. Dowry is root cause of domestic violence. Besides the poor people even rich people also have greed for dowry. Domestic violence injure a lady physically and mentally. As before marriage a women take dreams of leading a queen' s life with her dream guy in a dream house but domestic violence spoil this dream and unwillingly a lady has to live that life. According to a survey conducted by women help department of mumbai police, it is revealed that 63% females commit suicide due to domestic violence.
Nowadays, women are becoming educated and are equally compatible to men. Females are moving ahead in every field either scoring good marks or getting promotions in jobs. Addition to this, they are becoming self-dependent as they can earn sufficient money for fulfilling their basic necesseties. Most of the women do marriage to fulfill their needs and if they become able to fulfill their desires they do not need to do marriage. According to a survey conducted by Harvard university, females are prior than males almost in every field.
I put down the pen saying that, women are able to do their protection; earn money and fullfill their basic needs. As marriage is a very important decision, so we should do it when we are fully prepared for it. Moverover, as we are living in a male dominate society where even god is regarded as "he". To handle these problems women should be strong enough.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 54, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...bond of love and trust between two souls . Marriage is considered as one of the mo...
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Line 3, column 340, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a woman' or simply 'women'?
Suggestion: a woman; women
...ically and mentally. As before marriage a women take dreams of leading a queen s life w...
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Line 3, column 342, Rule ID: WOMAN_WOMEN[1]
Message: 'woman' is the singular form of 'women'. Consider using 'woman'?
Suggestion: woman
...ally and mentally. As before marriage a women take dreams of leading a queen s life w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, so, therefore, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1749.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 361.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84487534626 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35889894354 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6090995703 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562326869806 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 567.9 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.5901336801 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.2857142857 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1904761905 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.09523809524 7.06120827912 30% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241568390032 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0642136310197 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0830277577224 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141332924214 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0437319609041 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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