In many countries woman no longer feel the need to get married. sOme people believe that this is because women are able to learn their own income and therefore do not require financial security that marriage can bring too. to what extent do you agree?
basically, "marriage is way to connect two souls", which is not bothered by self reliable lady of advanced time. so, through this essay some people brought the fact in light that today women are earning at their own so, not interested in searching partners as they can also bring financial security for them. I wholeheartedly believe that this perception is right however, threre are other factors responsible also which I will highlight in my writing before shaping up my opinion.
To commence with, some people think that financial support is the reason that women do not want to marry. as in past times due to lack of knowledge regarding the equality and thier rights, women tend to rely on partners for finances and lion share of ladies were illiterate as compared to presence time where majority of women are highly qualified and recognise their rights. Therefore, education is behind the thinking of females notions about marriage, and to enable them to make a killing. likewise, as girls are opening pathways to every field by getting treassure of knowledge. which in turn is offering them high level jobs also sethings up their minds to find a well educated partner like them. which some do not able to find as nowadays majority of males are not employed on high posts. so their high expectations are barrier in their marriage.
similarly, other reasons are cases of domestic violence. nowadays girls are tortured after wedding due to manifold reasons. one of them is dowry system. it's quintessence is india where a recent study revealed that outhe of ten six women are physically harmed for dowry which forces girls to commit suicide and burning them alive. so this leaves a worse impact on other as they think that they are earning sufficient amount so why they should spoil their lives. in addition to this, the another vital factor is after marriage, allet sacrifices are done by girls such as their work, aspires, views , and most prominent part of thier life is family.
to elucidate, after givinget plethora of answers to this qquestion, In my perspective it is not a blunder that girso are not interested in sacredit relationships although, I think that money cannot support a person emotionally which can only we get from our partners, and also this perception of women is also disrespecting the ritualso of one's culture.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, likewise, regarding, similarly, so, therefore, well, i think, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 13.1623246493 190% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1956.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 395.0 315.596192385 125% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95189873418 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45809453852 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63893117747 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 228.0 176.041082164 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577215189873 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 621.0 506.74238477 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 80.366892252 49.4020404114 163% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.058823529 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2352941176 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.94117647059 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 26.0 5.01903807615 518% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165529958978 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0497274818981 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0554240710294 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0974696874323 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0427848316787 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 78.4519038076 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.