In a war of ideas, it is people who get killed”. Does a common man suffer from a group’s ideology? Express your opinion, and support the same with reasons and examples.9
Since the existence of the world there have been ample of conflicts of ideas among multifarious groups or individuals which resulted in the massive destruction in the form of war or other devastating situations. Common masses do suffer the consequences of these damaging situations with or without their consent, so I am consummately in accord with the given statement.
To commence, there is no ambiguity in saying that, numerous groups are made on the basis of color, caste and religion, and it is also undeniable that these groups often create hassle in the society due to their disruptive and conservative behavior. Political parties leaders often lead the youth of the society into anti-social activities such as drug abuse, extortion, communism, rape and murder, while they themselves are hiding in the high-security buildings. Apart from this, terrorist attacks such as suicide bombing, sleeping cells, slaughtering of innocent masses and other nefarious activities that are conducted by the ISIS agents, who generally belong to the Islamic religion also label the sophisticated people of similar religion with terrorism.
Therefore, further agitation is created with the possibility of racist and hatred attacks against ethical masses of that religion. Moreover, World war 1 and 2 is the evidence of dispute of ideas among the different people, and nuclear attack on Hiroshima and Nagasaki also undeniably occurred because of the distinct opinions among the higher authorities. Apparently, innocent multitude are still combating with the subsequent negative effects of the nuclear attack as most of the generation of those regions is suffering with either a fatal physical infirmity or any trivial bodily disorder.
Thus, it can be deduced that, it's the common people of the society who have to confront the catastrophic impacts created through group's ideology either they are in the support of it or not. So, for the betterment of the society, brotherhood and peace should be supported, and consent of the innocent multitude in crucial decisions should also be considered to ascertain propitious fellowship in the blooming civilization.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, if, moreover, so, still, therefore, thus, while, apart from, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 8.36945812808 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 31.9359605911 166% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1817.0 1207.87684729 150% => OK
No of words: 334.0 242.827586207 138% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44011976048 5.00649968141 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 3.92707691288 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93500078783 2.71678728327 108% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 139.433497537 143% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595808383234 0.580463131201 103% => OK
syllable_count: 576.9 379.143842365 152% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.5024630542 161% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 44.3442217205 50.4703680194 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 181.7 104.977214359 173% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.4 20.9669160288 159% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.6 7.25397266985 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 6.9802955665 14% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 2.75862068966 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146920543603 0.242375264174 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0542819214226 0.0925447433944 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0426204081553 0.071462118173 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0840305405806 0.151781067708 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0147106223346 0.0609392437508 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.9 12.6369458128 165% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.52 53.1260098522 56% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 10.9458128079 158% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.86 11.5310837438 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.95 8.32886699507 131% => OK
difficult_words: 120.0 55.0591133005 218% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.94827586207 201% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.3980295567 146% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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