The lecture says about,how people are keeping wild birds in their home; people should think about how they see around, to keep them safe, so when they decided to made a good place in their apartment that the families live there, should not made of glass, it’s obviously using glass is attractive for modern architectures but, the bad point is, it's deadly for birds,because, it's reflex such as mirror and birds do not understand the differences of them and they think noting there like as out so, they fly through it, to be free but,unfortunately, that killed them easily.
first solution is, use dark or colorful glasses instead of crystal glasses because, when the birds don't see the out side, they have never try to fly through it, but the problem is, it makes a too dark place for human, and maybe they'll have some problems, to use lots of lights, also, waste the electricity.
second they think to use some signals to help them in rooms to not have an accident with the facilities in the house of humans, everybody knows that birds use some signal to find their way but the problem of these solution is maybe this signals effect on them to make a wrong decision.
in the summarize, humans should think about all the sights to, make a comfortable place to live for wild birds, and it shows that, they get rely on people and feel free in addition make the families happy.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, second, so, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.4613686534 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 5.04856512141 59% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 7.30242825607 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 12.0772626932 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 22.412803532 120% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 30.3222958057 119% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.01324503311 80% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1141.0 1373.03311258 83% => OK
No of words: 247.0 270.72406181 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61943319838 5.08290768461 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 4.04702891845 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39982297041 2.5805825403 93% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 145.348785872 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570850202429 0.540411800872 106% => OK
syllable_count: 344.7 419.366225166 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 3.25607064018 215% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 8.23620309051 24% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.51434878587 198% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 13.0662251656 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 61.0 21.2450331126 287% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 140.535582683 49.2860985944 285% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 285.25 110.228320801 259% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 61.75 21.698381199 285% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 14.75 7.06452816374 209% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 4.19205298013 358% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 4.33554083885 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.27373068433 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284622696826 0.272083759551 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.166144803562 0.0996497079465 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0874149349408 0.0662205650399 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166144803562 0.162205337803 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0874149349408 0.0443174109184 197% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 31.2 13.3589403974 234% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 26.48 53.8541721854 49% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 24.7 11.0289183223 224% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 10.4 12.2367328918 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.42419426049 110% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 63.6247240618 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 54.0 10.7273730684 503% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 26.4 10.498013245 251% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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