Some people think that exercise is the key to health while others feel that having a balanced diet is more important. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
In this modern ear, there is an ongoing deliberation among people about personal health, and different ways to keep fit. While it is possible to calm that the food and beverage protect our health, my view is that the exercise as the methodical and optimized way to keep healthy. In this essay, I shall explain my point of view by analyzing both sides of the argument.
First and foremost, exercising is one of the essential things that everyone has to do on the day-to-day basis. This has been proven by many types of research in a methodical manner. For example, to be a healthy person, everyone has to do 20 minutes exercise every day in a gym or physically in their day-to-day life. It will burn fat from our body while keeping us healthy. Therefore, it is believed that the exercise is the easiest way to be a healthy person.
On the other hand, some people believe that by controlling food and beverage, people can maintain a healthy life. Therefore, they always focus on diet and neglect oily foods and fat-related foods from their daily meal. For example, people reject junk foods from restaurants, which are oilier. But, most of them can’t control the obesity, cholesterol and burn extra fat. Therefore it is strongly believed that foods and beverages are not the major factors for a healthy life.
In conclusion, it is taken into consideration that exercise as the major factor to reduce the risk into a certain extent, and it is strongly believed that professionals and governments should take necessary actions for educating the general public.
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...ake necessary actions for educating the general public.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, therefore, while, as to, for example, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 20.9802955665 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1305.0 1207.87684729 108% => OK
No of words: 267.0 242.827586207 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88764044944 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68073237776 2.71678728327 99% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 139.433497537 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561797752809 0.580463131201 97% => OK
syllable_count: 410.4 379.143842365 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.1324623409 50.4703680194 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.2142857143 104.977214359 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0714285714 20.9669160288 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.42857142857 7.25397266985 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.122563272047 0.242375264174 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0419155015501 0.0925447433944 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0368829223248 0.071462118173 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0670217538033 0.151781067708 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0364372108912 0.0609392437508 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 12.6369458128 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 53.1260098522 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.9458128079 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 11.5310837438 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.32886699507 98% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 55.0591133005 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 65.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 58.5 Out of 90
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