The table below shows the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two periods.
The table illustrates the amount of people that visited the museum the year before and the year after the renovation of Ashdown, while the pie chart shows the survey feedback from the tourist about their experience. These responses were recorded on the scale of very satisfied to very dissatisfied and including no response.
Overall, before refurbished the majority of the crowd were and only 15% were very satisfied, however, after renovating the museum most of the visitors commented to be satisfied and just 5% complained to be very dissatisfied. People that ignored the survey remain stable for both years.
Before changing the infrastructure approximately 15% were very satisfied and 30% was satisfied. Moreover, a significant number of people (40%) were dissatisfied, whereas, only one in ten was extremely dissatisfied.
On the other hand, after refurbishing the Ashdown museum the same amount of visitors that disliked stated liking the museum. Likewise, that the tourist that enjoyed the visit the most increased by 20 percent. Consequently, the population of travelers that were unpleased by the place reduced to one in twenty for highly dissatisfied and less than a fifth dissatisfied.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, however, if, likewise, moreover, whereas, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 32.9175257732 24% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1019.0 937.175257732 109% => OK
No of words: 188.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42021276596 4.54256449028 119% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00046680388 2.54303337028 118% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 127.690721649 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.563829787234 0.622605031667 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 315.9 290.88556701 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.41237113402 120% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.13402061856 22% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 1.83505154639 272% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 1.44329896907 346% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.6762126316 44.8134815571 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.222222222 76.5299724578 148% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8888888889 16.8248392259 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.88888888889 4.34317383033 205% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286730919923 0.216113520407 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104238676612 0.0766984524023 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0927667454342 0.0603063233224 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166757903751 0.12726935374 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0678272216448 0.0580467560999 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 8.37731958763 173% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 70.7449484536 60% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 3.82989690722 292% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 7.45979381443 165% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 8.71597938144 162% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 7.59969072165 119% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 41.2886597938 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 8.62886597938 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 8.15463917526 184% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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