‘Since we don’t know what is going to happen tomorrow, we should focus only on the present day.’
Do you think this has more advantages or disadvantages? Support your point of view with reasons and examples from your own experience.
Nowadays, there is an ongoing debate among people about either people should focus on present time or future decisions, which attracted numerous controversies and drawn the attention from the public. It can be agreed that making the prediction about future can result more productive outcome, while on the other hand stands a perspective that living in present and thinking about it is good. This essay will further elaborate on advantages and disadvantages associated with each notion and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.
At the very outset, there are numerous benefits attributed to make planing about what is going to happen tomorrow, but the most conspicuous one stems from the fact that by predicting the future happening an individual can prepare his self according to the situations to handle them in better way. Moreover, forecasting the future can build confidence and other personal traits of human beings. As an illustration, according to a startling new research, the people who think about their future rather than present day are far more successful than others. Therefore, future planing plays a vital role in increasing an individual\’s performance level.
On the other hand, there are some drawbacks linked with present day living. Because focusing on present can lead to worst conditions like as, lack of resources and demotivation. For example, ninety percent of student passed the exam with good grades who prepared themselves for exams in advance. Hence, thinking about present can lead to great faliure.
In view of arguments outlined above one can conclude that the benefits of preparing for upcoming days outweigh the disadvantages of living in future only.
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| 2018-07-18 | Manjeet Sidhu | 75 | view |
| 2018-07-06 | Davi kaur | 77 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 113, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'to the worst'.
Suggestion: to the worst
...g. Because focusing on present can lead to worst conditions like as, lack of resources a...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, moreover, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 20.9802955665 52% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 31.9359605911 128% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1429.0 1207.87684729 118% => OK
No of words: 269.0 242.827586207 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31226765799 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83327473492 2.71678728327 104% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 139.433497537 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.620817843866 0.580463131201 107% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 379.143842365 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.2007383923 50.4703680194 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.083333333 104.977214359 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4166666667 20.9669160288 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 7.25397266985 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155016789172 0.242375264174 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0559213205511 0.0925447433944 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0244307268968 0.071462118173 34% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0889975051336 0.151781067708 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0196310436158 0.0609392437508 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 12.6369458128 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 53.1260098522 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.9458128079 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 11.5310837438 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.36 8.32886699507 112% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 55.0591133005 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.94827586207 141% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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