Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter
– explain why you changed jobs
– describe your new job
– tell him/her your other news
Hi John,
Hope you and your family are doing well. I know it's been really long we haven't seen each other.
I wanted to inform you that I have opted for a new job and have left my previous organization. The best reason to switch my job is that my new office is located just across the street and it hardly takes 5 minutes to reach my work place. Also, my new company has given me a job offer of a manager.
In my current role, I am managing a team of 12 sales representative. My designation is sales manager and I am directly reporting to the head of sales. The new role is challenging as I have to keep boosting my team to achieve their individual targets set by the management. However, it has been good so far and I am really enjoying my work as it is nearby my house.
Moreover, I want to inform you that I am buying a new car - Nissan Sentra next month since now I am able to save more money than before. I am so happy and thank god for being kind to me. Once I get my car delivered, I shall come to pick you and go for a drive. Hope to see you really soon.
Take care
Ali
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 73, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: haven't
...ng well. I know its been really long we havent seen each other. I wanted to inform ...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 299, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... has given me a job offer of a manager. In my current role, I am managing a team...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, moreover, really, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 32.9175257732 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 875.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 218.0 206.0 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.01376146789 4.54256449028 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33748926194 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.600917431193 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 284.4 290.88556701 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.6973279348 44.8134815571 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 62.5 76.5299724578 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5714285714 16.8248392259 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.92857142857 4.34317383033 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.107429927414 0.216113520407 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0397955749693 0.0766984524023 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0436228325734 0.0603063233224 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0743846923008 0.12726935374 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0479164766857 0.0580467560999 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.2 8.37731958763 62% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 5.68 8.71597938144 65% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.99 7.59969072165 92% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.