As populations around the world grow older, the cost of healthcare for the elderly is rising. Governments are increasingly finding it difficult to bear the cost of healthcare of these increasing numbers. Even their families are not able to take good care of their elderly relatives.
What is your opinion and what are your suggestions to tackle the problem?
Support your point of view with reasons and/or examples from your own experience or observations.
Healthcare problems are increasing fastly day by day due to air pollution, trees cutting and by decreasing natural resources in present era. In elder age people are facing most of these kind's problems. Some people thinks that as populations around the world grow older, the cost of healthcare for the elderly is rising. Governments are increasingly finding it difficult to bear the cost of healthcare of these increasing numbers. Even their families are not able to take good care of their elderly relatives. I discuss my views in follwing passages.
Firstly, when people grow, some family members think that they can't afford their medical expenses due to lack of their good health. Furthermore, government find it difficult to support everone for treatment so that's why gevernment should open the charity hospitals, which will charge low expenses on treatment and even on medicines. There should organise free regular checkup camps in routine for people's help. Moreover, families should use proper healthy food and avoid fast food for their good health and also they need to use healthy oils, these routine's healthy tips give support from taking care of major diseases.
In addition, government and people can jointly fight with health issues for individual's health care. It's not a single person's duty to take care of others, everone has to be taking initial steps for everyone's health care.
To conclude, treatment are very costly in present era, so everyone should take care of their health to avoid any major diseases.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 64, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...ow, some family members think that they cant afford their medical expenses due to la...
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Line 2, column 210, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
...ult to support everone for treatment so thats why gevernment should open the charity ...
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Line 3, column 101, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
...lth issues for individuals health care. Its not a single persons duty to take care ...
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Line 3, column 118, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...dividuals health care. Its not a single persons duty to take care of others, everone ha...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, so, as to, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1278.0 1207.87684729 106% => OK
No of words: 248.0 242.827586207 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15322580645 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49666791472 2.71678728327 92% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 139.433497537 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608870967742 0.580463131201 105% => OK
syllable_count: 387.9 379.143842365 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.9508114757 50.4703680194 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.3076923077 104.977214359 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0769230769 20.9669160288 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.46153846154 7.25397266985 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.472023924927 0.242375264174 195% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.165176528189 0.0925447433944 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.165949731743 0.071462118173 232% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.262850793186 0.151781067708 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.221755252087 0.0609392437508 364% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 12.6369458128 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.1260098522 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 11.5310837438 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.32886699507 100% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 55.0591133005 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.94827586207 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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