Media promotes violence in society . Agree or disagre?
Media plays an important role to aware the public about the problems that occuring in the today's world.It has been an area to determine that the work done by media capiously brings violence and disturbs the society in different ways or not.I give balance opinion to the aforementioned statement.
Firstly, the information provided by the media regularly about any topic is always not correct.The media add some extra material to make their news more attractive towards the people.Media also becomes the reason of spreading disputes between two
religions.Media provides false information to increase the TRP of the channels.
On the other hand, media also awares the people about the problems that are occuring in world and all over the world.It also awares the people about the wheather by wheather forecasting.
Overall, the media helps the people in many ways.But it is responsible for promoting the violence also.
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... responsible for promoting the violence also.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, so, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 41.998997996 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 781.0 1615.20841683 48% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 147.0 315.596192385 47% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31292517007 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.48200454523 4.20363070211 83% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77872629463 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 176.041082164 53% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.632653061224 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 247.5 506.74238477 49% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 20.2975951904 177% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 88.992626099 49.4020404114 180% => OK
Chars per sentence: 195.25 106.682146367 183% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.75 20.7667163134 177% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.0 7.06120827912 184% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222964310467 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.136787610859 0.084324248473 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0663077135058 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122716958725 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0638582872889 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.0 13.0946893788 168% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 26.48 50.2224549098 53% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.5 11.3001002004 164% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.11 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.04 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 78.4519038076 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 9.78957915832 291% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 16.4 10.1190380762 162% => OK
text_standard: 29.0 10.7795591182 269% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 9
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