How do you think the crime would reduce – with harsher punishments or moral teachings? Discuss both the views and take a stand?
Nowadays crime rate is gradually increasing, therefore governments of all the countries look for remedial actions to be taken up in order to mitigate the prevailing situation. Some people argue that punishment should be imposed on criminals while some argue that moral teaching can controll the situation.
On my point of view, if capital punishment is implemented the criminal does not have an opportunity to correct themselves. Sometimes if he was charged due to the loopholes of the law, the punishment cannot be withdrawn because he must be dead at the point of revealing the truth. Besides that governments has to bear a lucrative amount of funds to maintain the jails. However meditation programmes can be arranged during the imprisonment time which can change the physiology and psycology of the prisoners. Since people are different to each other the strategy to rehabilitate each one is different to each other.
In conclusion it is recommended to implement a moral teaching programmes inside the jails, together with the punishment other than capital punishment. This approach can make them regret on their crimes and also it will help them to come to the correct path and find their real strengths. Together with the moral teaching it is better if governments can provide them with vocational training.
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- one world one language 90
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, however, if, look, so, therefore, while, as to, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 8.36945812808 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1119.0 1207.87684729 93% => OK
No of words: 213.0 242.827586207 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25352112676 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91231219141 2.71678728327 107% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 139.433497537 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.600938967136 0.580463131201 104% => OK
syllable_count: 340.2 379.143842365 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.3369295693 50.4703680194 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 111.9 104.977214359 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3 20.9669160288 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.6 7.25397266985 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.12807881773 73% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 6.9802955665 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136105960545 0.242375264174 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0542245844325 0.0925447433944 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0556698607361 0.071462118173 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0922693375009 0.151781067708 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0480719657924 0.0609392437508 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 12.6369458128 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 53.1260098522 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 11.5310837438 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.32886699507 102% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 55.0591133005 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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