International entertainers including sports personality often get paid millions of dollars in one year in your view with widespread poverty in world are these huge earnings justified
It is undoubtedly the case that are predefined earnings to international entertainers are justified or not? This issue is affecting the society adversely. In this essay it will examine the possible reasons for this phenomenon that authorities could implement to mend this.
the first step is to understand why these famous personalities are earning such great amount of Money, and why it is not right? Broadly speaking there are some reasons for this. the first and foremost, in the present scenario, poverty is taking a dangerous face so it is not right justification that some people earn million dollars in one year whereas, such people also exists who even are not getting basic necessities of life for many years. the good quintessence of it's is indian where 60% of natives are below poverty line, and on opposite huge amount of money is paid to indian astudents well as international personalities. thus, little part of that pay can be invested every year by execution not only for development but also for providing grants to NGOS who aid the destitute people.
apart from that, one of the other reason for this is that international famous people who sometimes make killing in one year only by doing advertisements. hence these are rIght because some people in different professions are doing more industrious work as compared to them, are not still paid handsome salaries in many years. as a paragon, recently it has been surveyed about rIlchest people in which most of the names on list are of celebrities.therefore, it should be responsibility of government to have equality for all professionals.
To elucidate, manifold reasons are given for this phenomenon. however, I believe that government should take some measures for this by justifying their earnines which must more concerned to abate the poverty from world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, so, still, therefore, thus, well, whereas, apart from, broadly speaking
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1532.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08970099668 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03333357389 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581395348837 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 494.1 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.4115942802 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.846153846 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1538461538 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.38461538462 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177417555693 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0610325364482 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0633102231474 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0973901540157 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0427539327502 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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