It is said that for some developed countries, tourism may cause some disadvantages. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this?
In developing or developed countries, tourism is primary source of income. Some people opine that tourism is source of scads of problems like pollution yet I strongly believe that tourism has great way to show heritage of country. In this essay, there will an examination on both side of contention, before deducing an even handed conclusion.
To commence with, there is a deluge of benefits of tourism. With help of tourism, nation can represents their culture and interact with different cultures people so they are able make their bond stronger with different culture's people. Moreover, it is way to provide employment to masses. Tourism is responsible for flourishing scads of industries, for instance hotels, restaurants and so on. Tourists are brought umpteen of cultural things which support the sellers economically and gives a much needed boost to the economy of the country.
On the other side, several people thought that tourism is responsible for upsurge in pollution because vehicles emissions are main source of pollution and it leads to numerous problems like climate changes. Sometime people from other countries do not follow rules of host country so they induce various problems and sometimes they have to pay for this.
Agglomerating the above elaborated points, one can reiterate that benefits of tourism over weigh its negative points so every nation should put efforts to enhance tourism.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: represent
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 31.9359605911 119% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1200.0 1207.87684729 99% => OK
No of words: 225.0 242.827586207 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33333333333 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69611151178 2.71678728327 99% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 139.433497537 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.635555555556 0.580463131201 109% => OK
syllable_count: 374.4 379.143842365 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.503897773 50.4703680194 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.090909091 104.977214359 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4545454545 20.9669160288 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.72727272727 7.25397266985 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193456288021 0.242375264174 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0727418650271 0.0925447433944 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0542544217422 0.071462118173 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104282818799 0.151781067708 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0461865854446 0.0609392437508 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 12.6369458128 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 53.1260098522 80% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 11.5310837438 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 8.32886699507 112% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 55.0591133005 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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