consumer goods have become the most important part of human lives. do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages.
consumerism is social and economic ideology that encourages people to acquire more products and service in on ever increasing amount. It is incontrovertible fact that the given topic assert that the consumers good have lot of merits for the humans beings outweigh the demerits. In this essay, I am going to examine this question from both points of view.
on one side of the argument there are people who argue that the benefits of considerably outweigh its disadvantages. The main reason for believing this is that the consumers goods are very beneficial for the economic growth and development for the country. It is also possible to say that if the people buy the more thing in the market and they pay the more money on this things, in this way the economy is boost. Last but not least, the consumers good shows the life style of the people and they live the better living standard. One good illustrated shows that after few years people have no more choices but now they have lots of things they buy the those things which has lot of features and facilities, in this way people show their living standard.
On the other hand, it is also possible to make the opposing case. It is often argued that it has some demrits the people waste the lot of money to buy the counsmers goods whereas, they mostly buy the those things, which is not useful for person. A particularly good example here nowadays we saw lot of adveristement which influence the people to buy the things like the fair creams, they buy this type of products which do not affectful on their skin in this way, the lost the lot of money. Moreover, when the new product launch in the market people throw the old things it create the pollution and effect the health for example the plastic.
As we have seen, there one number of answer to this question. On believe however, I trend to believe that the consumer goods has lot of advantages outweigh the disadvantages. Furthermore, It is said that earth can satisfied everybody need but not everybody greed.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, whereas, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1670.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 357.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67787114846 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49919915929 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.484593837535 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 511.2 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.3973626647 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.333333333 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163472604935 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0625287127237 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0757314429961 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116932439972 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0452760119738 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 50.2224549098 130% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.16 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.34 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.