Some people think that the government is wasting money on the arts and this money could be better spent elsewhere. To what extent do you agree or disagree.
Art is the externalization of the individual skills and reflects the heritage of a country. At present, art seems to be losing it’s values due to less concerned by the government. A fair amount of people believe that spending on art is wastage of money while there are other burning issues to be addressed like education, development, employment, medical facilities, road system, infrastructure and the money should be spent to provide the basic facilities to the citizens rather than on art. I do not completely accord on it.
In my opinion, there are a plethora of reasons to give monitory support to art. Firstly, art is an expression of culture and the history of a nation. It is the real asset of every country that brings uniqueness and pride to every country. For instance, the temples of madurai in India has sculptures which show the Indian culture. Similarly, the elephanta caves demonstrate the religious part of Indian culture.
Secondly, A handsome amount of revenue income for the government can be generated from the art galleries and museums. Mesmerizing sculptures and beautifully engraved paintings adorn the beauty of the museum and attract tourists. The famous painting of mona lisa by Leonardo Da Vinci is a superb example of it which is the most visited painting in the louvre museum.
To conclude, art is an integral part of every country. Therefore, it should be the priority to preserve art. The government should fund the museums and promote artists’ values to keep and maintain the glorified history of the country otherwise artists and the art will be lost in oblivion.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, similarly, so, therefore, while, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1350.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05617977528 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90225683341 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.573033707865 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 65.4726405964 49.4020404114 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.0 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.53333333333 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182968559568 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0511785653609 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0533702031286 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101254272738 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0722938343758 0.056905535591 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.57 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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