Some people argue that reading is the best way for graduates to improve their knowledge but
others think that there are better ways for adults to do that.
Discuss both views and state your opinion.
There is no doubt that reading improves your knowledge in many aspects. But it is argued that this is not the only way to improve people knowledge. This essay agrees that reading is not the best way to get awareness about the subjects and the meantime will discuss both points of view as well.
It is true that reading gives the requested details regarding what you are looking for a graduate even though have to spend more time searching and reviewing. Also there are many reading materials and you can find it easily at any time. Moreover, traditionally studying mean reading text books , related stuff and get knowledge. Likewise, school to college and the college to university students get information through reading, specially their text books and refer to the libraries. Not only that but also, with this improved technology you can search anything with a simple click via internet and most popular in read like Wikipedia.
However, this is not the easiest and most effective way as for my point of view because using this revamp technology we can get to know what we want easily by hearing or watching. Using television or internet , we can watch news or other programmers specially can refer Youtube and tap in to unlimited information. Also to watch something take less time than read a book and will memorize easily since our brain usually do so. As much as watching, graduate can improve his or her knowledge via listening to a radio or any other sound devices. Even when you are travelling you can listen to the vehicle radio or you can use your mobile phone. Not only that you can listen to other people conversations and get knowledge regarding things.
Finally, I believe that, even though using technology or without we can easily archive graduate's goal of improving knowledge using reading, watching and listening. But watching and listening is the best way to get educated, understand and memorize something that will lead to an express way of success in knowledge gathering.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ionally studying mean reading text books , related stuff and get knowledge. Likewi...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...be and tap in to unlimited information. Also to watch something take less time than ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, however, likewise, look, moreover, regarding, so, well, as for, no doubt, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 10.4138276553 230% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1666.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 339.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91445427729 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58166468797 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.519174041298 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 518.4 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.9749352215 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.125 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1875 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228140727332 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0830824517205 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0640323725517 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16806362472 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0886387827489 0.056905535591 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.