At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?
It is a fact that, currently, population of many nations consists of large proportion of younger people than old ones. In my opinion, having more ratio of young generation than old people certainly have more benefits than the drawbacks associated with it.
The main advantage is that young people can contribute more towards the economy of the country. This is to say that young people can work more than old people. Adults are physically fit and can be more productive. As a result, young people can boost revenue for the companies they work for. As a result, overall economy growth trajectory of the country will also grow. For instance, China and India have the highest growth driven profit percentage (GDP) in the world because their 70% of the population is young adults.
The major drawback is increased crime rate because of having large ratio of young than old people. This is because young people often create nuisance in the society due to lack of guidance from their elders. In addition, many adults get influenced by wrongdoers and they even participate in antisocial activities, which deteriorate the peace of the society. For instance, as per the recent report by Times newspaper published in January 2018, it was found that the arrests made in New York City last year consists of 67% of adult criminals between 17 to 29 years of age.
To conclude, despite the drawback of antisocial problems that young people create, which can be controlled by implemention of strict law and order. I believe having larger young population is more pragmatic in terms of countries growth.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 400, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'have the highest'.
Suggestion: have the highest
...lso grow. For instance, China and India have highest growth driven profit percentage GDP in ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, so, for instance, in addition, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1317.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96981132075 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57600727032 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566037735849 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 401.4 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.3933347686 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.0714285714 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9285714286 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.85714285714 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131318105999 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0516092028844 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0350180809111 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0822841670874 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0159915715861 0.056905535591 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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