People listen to music for different reasons and at different times. Why is music important to many people? Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice.
Every person on this earth has enjoyed music at some point of time in their lives. The reasons for them might be different and here I elaborate some of them. This essay will discuss the some benefits of music and then the importance of music to understand different cultures.
Music is a god gifted tool to the human fraternity to live healthy lives. It is an essential part of our lives as it provides enjoyment, helps to distress mind and body. It is a way to express our feelings that even a new born baby can understand. Moreover, it has been observed that music is good to improve concentration and that is why many pupils listen to music while studying. Furthermore, It is scientifically proven that music helps in treating many medical conditions like blood pressure, depression and several others. I can be a good example of it. 5 years ago I was diagnosed with a rare medical condition Lupus and my doctors suggested me to be happy as stress can promote it. Since then I started to listen to the music and we could see a tremendous improvement in my condition.
Moreover, music is an expression of culture and exists in some form or another in cultures all around the world. Music is a crucial part of ceremonies like weddings, funerals, child birth or any other festivals. For instance, in India, wedding is an event of 5 to 10 days which includes different ceremonies like “haldi”, “sangeet”, “maatipooja” etcetera and every ceremony has specific set of songs called as “Geet” in Hindi.
To recapitulate, music is important for us as it is an easily available source of entertainment and helps us to keep ourselves health and happy. Not only this, music is reflection of culture which make it easy to understand different cultures and their values.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, moreover, so, then, while, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1502.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89250814332 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.20342035691 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57003257329 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 480.6 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.0873108571 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.875 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1875 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 7.06120827912 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256148850458 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0803572821547 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0614911248317 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152215164034 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0607823032925 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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