Some people believe laws change human behaviour. Do you agree with it?
Laws are made by government to ensure peace and safety for the people. However, rules are meant to be broken.
Firstly, Wearing helmets by bicycle and two wheeler riders are made mandatory by the government. This rule is made so that
if they meet with an accident their heads are protected and safe from life threat.
Similarly, wearing seat belt while driving is also compulsory. These rules are existed but not followed by many people.
In the recent, government has introduced fine for breaking these laws. We now see everybody following the same rules.
Secondly, Punishments like imprisonment, death penalty etc are made so that people will not indulge in illegal activities.
By this act people are more cautious before taking any act in a society. In the absence of these punishment people would have done anything they desire at the cost of peace around the society.
Thirdly, rules are made for appropriate vehicle parking. especially in and around shopping centres, school zones, and busy industrial areas where there is massive crowd of people. Wrong parking can result in the chaotic situation cause heavy traffic on roads. Since fines introduced
for wrong parking, people become very alert and see that they park their vehicles in parking area only.
To conclude, strongly law changes human behaviour. They are needed for safety of the country.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 11, column 58, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Especially
...e made for appropriate vehicle parking. especially in and around shopping centres, school ...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, similarly, so, third, thirdly, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 31.9359605911 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1156.0 1207.87684729 96% => OK
No of words: 223.0 242.827586207 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18385650224 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45519687909 2.71678728327 90% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 139.433497537 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.663677130045 0.580463131201 114% => OK
syllable_count: 364.5 379.143842365 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6551724138 134% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.5024630542 63% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.0255946183 50.4703680194 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 68.0 104.977214359 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.1176470588 20.9669160288 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.52941176471 7.25397266985 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 10.0 4.12807881773 242% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.105194042497 0.242375264174 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0351507283439 0.0925447433944 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0780496911977 0.071462118173 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0453503528396 0.151781067708 30% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0636345624237 0.0609392437508 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 12.6369458128 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 53.1260098522 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.9458128079 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.88 11.5310837438 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.32886699507 104% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 55.0591133005 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.94827586207 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.3980295567 69% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 68.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 62.0 Out of 90
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