In under developed countries, tourism has disadvantages and can be said the opposite as well.
One of the most conspicuous trends of today's world is the colossal upsurge in the benefits and drawbacks of tourism in underdeveloped countries. The discussion on becoming a tourism magnet in these countries is a debatable topic and people all around the globe are divided in their opinions. The subject attracts the majority of views from people and remains a hot topic among people of concern. In this essay, I shall scrutinize my opinion by providing relevant examples and explanation before drawing my conclusion.
At the outset, there are myriad arguments in favor of my stance. The most preponderant one lies in the fact that tourism boost up the economy. In order to have an authentic reflection, it becomes a source of income by creating jobs and opportunities. The most impeccable example that I could provide here is that after Australia open up to tourism, its economy grew by 70 percent. Hence, I can substantiate my idea that tourism has positive impacts on the country.
Those who disagree with these ideas might have a cogent notion and could assert that tourism can have negative impacts on culture. Another angle on this debate suggests that the tourism industry can cause a cultural invasion. The most pertinent example that could be provided here is that a research suggests that Bali had 60 percent of culture devastation after becoming a tourism magnet.
To conclude, after taking the above-stated points into consideration, I am inclined to believe that the impacts tourism has on underdeveloped countries is pertinent and should not be overlooked.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'research'.
Suggestion: research
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'impacts'' or 'impact's'?
Suggestion: impacts'; impact's
...tion, I am inclined to believe that the impacts tourism has on underdeveloped countries...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, look, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 5.94088669951 185% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 20.9802955665 124% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 31.9359605911 128% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1322.0 1207.87684729 109% => OK
No of words: 258.0 242.827586207 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12403100775 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89107797042 2.71678728327 106% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 139.433497537 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581395348837 0.580463131201 100% => OK
syllable_count: 420.3 379.143842365 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 5.0 1.56157635468 320% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.349983052 50.4703680194 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.692307692 104.977214359 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8461538462 20.9669160288 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.61538461538 7.25397266985 22% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152717291857 0.242375264174 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0538787917962 0.0925447433944 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.041755857389 0.071462118173 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0921106045369 0.151781067708 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0277529253438 0.0609392437508 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 12.6369458128 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.1260098522 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 11.5310837438 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.32886699507 111% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 55.0591133005 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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