It is irrefutable to say that the advertisement plays a vital role in promoting brands. Nowadays, the advertisement is becoming an essential part of the business world, which attracted the numerous controversies from the public. It can be strongly agreed that advertisement is a good source of making the people aware about a specific product, while on the other hand stands a perspective that it can influence the people in the wrong way. This essay will further elaborate on both the sides and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.
At the outset, there are advantages associated with the advertisements. The most preponderant one is that advertisement can make the people aware of the qualities of the product. As an illustration, the research in this area shows that people who buy the product by watching the advertisement always make a right choice to choose the better product. For this reason, the importance of advertisement in enhancing awareness among buyers about the product should not be ignored.
Notwithstanding, some people hold an opposing view and tend to believe that advertisement always represent the misleading information. Most of the television adds not only contains an inaccurate information but also guide the customers to buy low-quality products. For example, a recent survey done by the Sydney University revealed that 80 per cent of customers who bought the product by influencing from television adds usually received low-quality products. Hence, people should never believe the information provided in advertisements.
In view of the arguments outlined above, one can conclude that despite having some drawbacks, the role of advertisement in making the people aware of the qualities of the product is instrumental indeed.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, thus, while, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1492.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38628158845 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.22208991828 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.537906137184 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.7232477479 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.769230769 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3076923077 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.30769230769 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130134588505 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0535159208534 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.03900149817 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0829192208928 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.041142863756 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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