You have seen an advertisement in an English newspaper for a job working in the City Museum shop during the holidays. You decide to apply for the job.
Write a letter to the director of the Museum. In your letter,
• introduce yourself
• explain what experience and special skills you have
• explain why you are interested in the job
Dear Sir/Ma’am,
I am writing to you in response to the advertisement in DAWN newspaper published last Saturday for the post of customer services in the City Museum.
My name is Huma Mohiuddin and I am a student of B.S Economics in Karachi University. These days I have been going through the newspapers and searching for a job for my summer break. Your advertisement is quite captivating to me as the requirements needed to be fulfilled for the job is compatible to my skills and expertise. My last internship for summer break was in retail services in a superstore and dealing with customers was also included in the nature of job. I would not be able to find difficulty in managing with the customers as I am very much fond in studying history and possess sound knowledge about the historical aspects of any antique piece.
I hope I would be able to meet your expectations for the job. I look forward to hearing from you.
Regards
Huma
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 51, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: S
... Huma Mohiuddin and I am a student of B.S Economics in Karachi University. These ...
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Line 7, column 63, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... to meet your expectations for the job. I look forward to hearing from you. Re...
^
Line 11, column 5, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... to hearing from you. Regards Huma
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 32.9175257732 55% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 795.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 167.0 206.0 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76047904192 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97794491282 2.54303337028 117% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 127.690721649 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592814371257 0.622605031667 95% => OK
syllable_count: 250.2 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.7358822464 44.8134815571 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.375 76.5299724578 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.875 16.8248392259 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.25 4.34317383033 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21824724304 0.216113520407 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0866237236368 0.0766984524023 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0704961530586 0.0603063233224 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129237226101 0.12726935374 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0783539891345 0.0580467560999 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 8.37731958763 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 8.71597938144 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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