You are going on a short course to a training college abroad. It is a college that you have not been to before.
Write a letter to the accommodation officer. In your letter,
give details of your course and your arrival/departure date
explain your accommodation needs
ask for information about getting to and from the college
Dear Sir,
I am writing to you to inform you that, I had recently enrolled for the quarterly course in the Docktan University and I have been selected for the course. Thus, I would like to request you to arrange some accommodation amenity for me as I have never been there before.
Moreover, my flight will depart on 3rd of September and would reach the destination on 4th of September. I would like to stay in a private flat without any roommates or colleague. If you can arrange it in a meantime than it will be wonderful. I am glad to see my new home for next few months.
Furthermore, The place should be near from college, there should be good ventilation facility and it should have basic equipments such as a bed, a dressing and study table, a wardrobe and so on. To add more, ambiance should be attractive and must reflect enchanted experience.
Lastly, you can let me know if you need any kind of documentation proof from my end or even from college. I will immediately proceed for that and I will deliver it to you as soon as possible. I hope you will send me the details shortly so that I can revert back to you.
Waiting for your response,
Thanks
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 181, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...lat without any roommates or colleague. If you can arrange it in a meantime than i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, lastly, moreover, so, thus, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 4.92783505155 345% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 966.0 937.175257732 103% => OK
No of words: 216.0 206.0 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.47222222222 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65608432671 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592592592593 0.622605031667 95% => OK
syllable_count: 300.6 290.88556701 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.5337512742 44.8134815571 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.5 76.5299724578 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 16.8248392259 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.08333333333 4.34317383033 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169831908128 0.216113520407 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0602820884959 0.0766984524023 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0574066910615 0.0603063233224 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100207016308 0.12726935374 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0711778942317 0.0580467560999 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 8.37731958763 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.35 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.