In general, people are living longer now. Discuss the causes of this phenomenon. Use specific reasons and details to develop your essay
Have you ever wonder why people are living longer nowadays than before? There can be different explanation about this phenomenon. In this essay, I will discuss how technology, exercise and advances in medicine make people live longer.
To begin with, technology has improved the way people live. Since they have access to internet on their cellphones, they can easily be informed about the kind of food they can consume and avoid. For instance, my sixty-year-old mom likes to watch videos on YouTube and reads blogs in order to know the fruits and vegetables that are good for her health. In addition to this, people get informed on the amount of food they should consume, and they do not even have to visit the nutritionist. My mother also makes a food pyramid based on the information she found online, and it really paid off.
Another reason is exercise. In the past, most people did not know how important regular exercise was for her health. For example, in North America there was a problem of obesity in the 20th century, but things have changed. As a consequence, people tend to work out more often. Moreover, more gyms and spaces where people can work out are being built. For instance, a new gym was open two years ago right next to our neighborhood, and my brother was able to join it, so he is now in a good shape nowadays.
One last reason is the advances in medicine that help people cure severe diseases. More and more treatments and medicines for serious diseases have been released in this century, and they strengthen the people’s lives. A friend of mine suffered from a breast cancer lately; however, she found an advanced and cheap treatment in a hospital that helped her get rid of it.
In conclusion, technology, exercise and advances in medicine are the reasons I consider more important for people living longer than before
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, really, so, then, as for, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1544.0 1977.66487455 78% => OK
No of words: 321.0 407.700716846 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80996884735 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55563002884 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.585669781931 0.524837075471 112% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 618.680645161 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.9013075409 48.9658058833 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.7777777778 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8333333333 20.6045352989 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.61111111111 5.45110844103 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180958465644 0.236089414692 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0667912644186 0.076458572812 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0667039567259 0.0737576698707 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12526220451 0.150856017488 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0888344624547 0.0645574589148 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 11.7677419355 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.32 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 86.8835125448 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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