Some people argue Laws changes human behavior whereas some disagree. Do you agree with it? Argumentative / persuasive/ opinionated type essay.
In this contemporary era, laws are the only way to control the public. Laws are useful for the society to keep rules and regulation in a proper way. Some people believe that laws can change the human behavior and other is with some opposite thought. In my opinion, laws are the only way to set people in a correct way.
To start with, there are several reasons why laws change human behavior. Laws are used for the betterment of the social group and individual. Everyone in the society has a different perspective on laws of obeying and disobeying it. In addition, breaking the laws is punishable. Fear consequences make people behave in both social and professional capacities.
Furthermore, legal problems which cannot end will bring some negative impact on their personal and professional life. There are many rules which help especially women feel equal and safe in the society, it is a positive change. Laws influences in the very significant way in young stars. For example, especially, many young stars are influenced by drugs and other anti-traditional activities that can be controlled by laws.
In a nutshell, it can be concluded that laws help the people in a positive way. Laws constantly change human behavior and prospection towards many things consciously and unconsciously.
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...human behaviour and prospection towards many thing consciously and unconsciously.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, so, for example, in addition, in my opinion, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 20.9802955665 43% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 31.9359605911 78% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1090.0 1207.87684729 90% => OK
No of words: 211.0 242.827586207 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16587677725 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80901557414 2.71678728327 103% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 139.433497537 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.582938388626 0.580463131201 100% => OK
syllable_count: 344.7 379.143842365 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.5024630542 68% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.6752097257 50.4703680194 47% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 72.6666666667 104.977214359 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0666666667 20.9669160288 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.25397266985 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 2.91625615764 240% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242951644147 0.242375264174 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0859029470174 0.0925447433944 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0994529748845 0.071462118173 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150639701504 0.151781067708 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0764474225976 0.0609392437508 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 12.6369458128 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 53.1260098522 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 10.9458128079 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.11 11.5310837438 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.32886699507 99% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 55.0591133005 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.94827586207 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.3980295567 73% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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