Children watch more TV
It is true that children spend most of their spare time on watching television in recent years and did less physical or creative activities. There could be several reasons resulting in this problem, and I believe that it can be solved by applying various methods.
There are convincing caused why children are not interested in creative things any more. Firstly, the lack of partner, brother or sister in a long time can make this case happen. Most of those activities such as: playing sports, reading books and painting require the guidance of parents and support from siblings or friends which contributes significantly to boost children’s passion. Another reason why they find watching television more enjoyable than other activities is that there is a wide range of television programs for children from cartoon, reality shows to music shows and animal documentary. All of them contain funny characters, colorful scenes and appealing strcutures which can make children find it so hard to stop watching.
In my opinion, several solutions should be taken to address this issue in time. One of the idealest environment for childs to spend more time on doing physical and creative activities is schools. Teachers should hold more events in schools such as: sport days, art meetings and cookin classes to strengthen children’s interest in these kinds of activities. Moreover, parents are also an indispensable factor encouraging childs to participate more in creatibe things. They should spend more their free time on being with their children, playing with them and telling them more about the undeniable benefits of physical activities as well as the detrimental impacts of watching much television.
In conclution, I believe that the combination of teachers and parents can be taken to tackle the problem of watching television so much of children.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, so, then, well, such as, as well as, in my opinion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1570.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30405405405 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84704907909 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574324324324 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.9927262733 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.769230769 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7692307692 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.92307692308 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.289160645519 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10158378385 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0750112257676 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17641213975 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0500554294005 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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