The bar chart compares the rate of birth and death in Switzerland over a period of forty years from 1970. It also forecast trends untill 2020.
It can be seen from the graph that in 1970, the birth rate was the highest at 1. 2 million, whereas the death rate was exactly 1 million in this country. In contrast, the death rate( 1.3 million) was slightly higher than that of birth rate( 1. 2 million) in 1980. At the same time, the figure for birth rate was a moderate 1. 8 million, as opposed to to merely 1. 6 million by 1990. However, the number of deaths nearly a half in 2000 that of birth rate. Similarly, the figure for birth rate in Switzerland had the largest a massive at 3 million, as against only one million of deaths in 2010.
Projections upto 2020 indicates that the birth rate is estimated to improve and it will reach 3. 3 million, but the number of deaths will touch well under 1 million in the same country.
Overall, it is clear that Switzerland's birth rate is likely to increasing, while the death rate is decreasing within the given period.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, similarly, so, well, whereas, while, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 869.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 197.0 196.424390244 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.41116751269 4.92477711251 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36174297603 2.65546596893 89% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.51269035533 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 244.8 283.868780488 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 8.94146341463 157% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.7532450324 43.030603864 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 62.0714285714 112.824112599 55% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 14.0714285714 22.9334400587 61% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.85714285714 5.23603664747 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.349078610211 0.215688989381 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132578867638 0.103423049105 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106414686879 0.0843802449381 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.245813596878 0.15604864568 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0875453247487 0.0819641961636 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.4 13.2329268293 48% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 91.11 61.2550243902 149% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.0 10.3012195122 39% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.71 11.4140731707 68% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.74 8.06136585366 84% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 11.4329268293 44% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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