Too much emphasis is placed on going to university for academic study. People should be encouraged to do vocational training, because there is a lack of qualified tradespeople such as electricians or plumbers. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Academic study recently became an essential step to be achieved, where most of the community urge their own family members to step into that stage. This insistence for the collage and ignoring the blue collar jobs leads to unstable work environment that are lacking a main level of the industry and a needs for the society. I agree with that to some sort of extent, where I am going to elaborate more closely.
On one hand, the academic study is crucial to improve the industry and improve the level of quality. In addition, the higher collages is still the main area to have the researches and development that it is very necessary for the sustainability of the community resources. In 1990, Engineers Australia research led to a power saving that it would not be unless many efforts of people continued their study to reach to that academic level.
On the other hands, the vital hierarchy tier in any company or factory is the trades workers. Generally, the on-site staff who is always in direct contact with the machines, manufacturing, processing would be the best person to describe the pros and cons for any manufacturing, trades in this world. Besides, focusing on these particular jobs and create a systematic study to ensure always these vocational training reach the best practices and higher level of standard is an essential.
In my opinion, the qualified tradespeople has the same value in the society as same as the academical ones, and we need always to ensure the balance between them in the market to avoid a major disturbance that could lead to an industrial catastrophe.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 377, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[9]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually put before the verb 'ensure'.
Suggestion: always ensure
...r jobs and create a systematic study to ensure always these vocational training reach the bes...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, so, still, in addition, sort of, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 31.9359605911 119% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1328.0 1207.87684729 110% => OK
No of words: 271.0 242.827586207 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90036900369 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73381682677 2.71678728327 101% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 139.433497537 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571955719557 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 431.1 379.143842365 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 5.0 1.56157635468 320% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.5024630542 132% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.0020999559 50.4703680194 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.8 104.977214359 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.1 20.9669160288 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.8 7.25397266985 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116021863515 0.242375264174 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0423747467706 0.0925447433944 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0254566566563 0.071462118173 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.065723358164 0.151781067708 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0268810298536 0.0609392437508 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 12.6369458128 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 53.1260098522 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.9458128079 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 11.5310837438 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.32886699507 107% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 55.0591133005 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.3980295567 123% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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