Last month you had a holiday overseas where you stayed with some friends. They have just sent you some photos of your holiday.
Write a letter to your friends. In your letter:
-Thank them for the photos and for the holiday
– Explain why you didn’t write earlier
– Invite them to come and stay with you
Dear John,
I hope you have great times. Thank you for sending me the photos of my travel to your hometown.
I had great time with you and your wife. Thank you again for all things you did thanks to Kathy for cocking wonderful delicious food and thank you to for notable advises me for how to find tourism attraction. That trip was amazing because I visited you and Kathy again.
I was very busy in this month and I couldn’t reply your letter. I’m really sorry for that.
I would like to invite both of you to visit my country. You will stay in my home and I go with you to show around the city and visit tourism attraction because my country is very attractive and we can a plenty of things to do.
I would like to see you again. Thanks again for photos and your warmth arm in your city.
Best regards,
Jack
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 81, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: 'thank'
Suggestion: thank
... Thank you again for all things you did thanks to Kathy for cocking wonderful deliciou...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, really, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 684.0 937.175257732 73% => OK
No of words: 157.0 206.0 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.35668789809 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53976893118 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.14595808696 2.54303337028 84% => OK
Unique words: 89.0 127.690721649 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566878980892 0.622605031667 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 201.6 290.88556701 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.6330738271 44.8134815571 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 57.0 76.5299724578 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.0833333333 16.8248392259 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.16666666667 4.34317383033 27% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.407326883025 0.216113520407 188% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.155256851739 0.0766984524023 202% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.086839173827 0.0603063233224 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.245318200135 0.12726935374 193% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0767121836058 0.0580467560999 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.6 8.37731958763 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 70.7449484536 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.12 8.71597938144 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.7 7.59969072165 88% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 41.2886597938 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 8.62886597938 58% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.